Naked Soul

Don't leave me free naked here
Without hope for be with you someday
That's how you marked me life
Life after you
It came out the soul of the body
I saw it without you i felt it
Because suddenly no longer you wanted me
Never thought to reach so much suffer
For your love
I left the kisses of tenderness
In the skin of my soul
But also withered
And they were suddenly

When your love had limit
Of loving me
Here i am naked
Like that you left me
Because I stayed
Without your murmurs of being
Without your silences or a love you
Without joy of all my day
To feel you loved me
To feel that your felt the same as me

I was ignored by your already ruin everything
In the contradiction of your mind
Nothing is irremediable
Because i left me naked in soul
Knowing that you loved me no more

When I gave everything for you
When i'm sure that i'll give it all again
But it wasn't my intention
Love you like i did
My soul says to give it all
If you will love
Do it with everything
Although you don't left with anything

I realized that to love like that
That yes
Is being really naked
Everything for love you like my interior does
And was a placer staying like this naked for love.
-Jonatan Vega

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