NAIVE SWEETNESS

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43614
United States
41° 35' 57.5376" N, 83° 37' 46.2792" W

Naive and sweet is her smile


all a torrent of love and happiness


she is all a sea of sweetness


 


Her knowing look captive's me


all a torrent of passion and tenderness


she is all a sea of sweetness


 


Her charming nature absorb's me


all a torrent of brightness and thoughtfullness


she is all a sea of sweetness

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