my struggle

Sat, 03/02/2013 - 10:02 -- frantz

With my shoulders weighed down and my body drained I push to overcome all obstacles. With whips and a lash my back heavy with a gash I push to overcome all obstacles. When I’m told I cannot and my mind can’t think I push to overcome all obstacles. No evil can hinder me no wall too high no water to deep because I push to overcome all obstacles.

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frantz

i hope you like it.

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