My Stronghold

It's cold         

I'm frustrated

Thinking of quitting

Yet, he's my stronghold 


Take a deep breath

Examine the scene

Hold it all in

It's not life or death


I can't do anything wrong

His helping presence is near

Patience is in every breath

He carries me along 


I have a lot to overcome

I am weak

I am timid

He's all I want to become. 

This poem is about: 
My family


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