My Shining Star

The darkness that surrounds me 
Is no comparison
To the light that I see
To the light that you are

The sky looks so bleak
And dark and cold
Except for one lone star
That shines ever so bright

My shining star
That guides me
Everytime I go somewhere
And watches over me

Don't you get it?
You're my star
Stars everntually die
But we all know they were there

We all remember them
I'll never stop loving you
I'll never forget you
Even when we're dead we're still here

The sky looks so dark and bleak
Ecept for my bright shinging star
That forever holds my heart
And blasts through the darkness surrounding me

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