After the writer's retreat
the poet, who I so admire-
( the one who organized it)
began an online forum.
And this features
questions and answers
commentary and critique...
My own in-depth questions
were of
discursiveness,
the rhetorical and didactic
- problem areas for me,
since I tend to rant on
whether speaking or writing
especially on society and politics.
Impassioned, carried away
I wonder how to reel myself
in-
and not lose my listeners,
readers...
The poet's answers were
cryptic like a Buddha,
philosophical, and not so much related
to craft.
Still, I didn't mind
I will learn somehow
to maintain
cohesion
both in my multilayered
poetry
as well as words spoken-
to not be the fiery,
gesticulating orator...
I'll follow any advice
though not bend
my views
I'll remain outspoken,
step on some toes
but still be respectful...
The poet's aim is to be
understood
( clarity equals a correct
interpretation.)
So let all hear my say!