My Life Has Danger

Thu, 06/13/2013 - 12:17 -- laa2267


United States
26° 21' 43.362" N, 97° 58' 51.906" W

My life is like a fish being caught by a bear.
I save myself by talking to a flower.
As the flower responds, “Be strong,” my thoughts swish away.
If I was as brave as a flower, I’d have power.
Flower power!
But I don’t feel that brave, so I walk away.

As I walk away, my life receives strength.
I wish I wasn’t as sad,
But my breath is out.
So I am mad.



I wrote this poem based on childhood bullies

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