My Dog-Thorn

Tue, 01/17/2017 - 18:22 -- Taj530

Three years, we are still together

You change my world

Bring happiness and joy

that I can never forget

O' Thorn, you are amazing

I love you and the furry skin you have 

 

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Taj530

7 years ago

Any feedback I would appreciate as this is the first poem I have posted on this site.

Thank you all. 

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