My Blue Place

Thu, 05/08/2014 - 15:26 -- ant5265

Beneath my own skin

 

Sins drain into the ocean

 

Eyes of the unknown

 

They hide from the world

 

They are criers of the clouds

 

Lightening fills the skies

 

I can feel the rain

 

My sand castle is crumbling

 

I am running faster

 

Running into fog

 

Through the air I hear angels

 

I pray god hears me

 

Closer to heaven

 

When I am here I can feel it

 

My feet in the sand

 

I breathe it all in

 

This is my life and reason

 

My dreams breathe further

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