My Biggest Critic

Wed, 11/09/2016 - 21:01 -- rocwal

My biggest critic of all is me 

I hate messing up, I really doAnd when it happens who do I blame You guessed it right ; I blame you But you happens to be me, so I never winI can't when the I'm never good enough for myself I couldn't give a fuck what others think The person I'm trying to impress is someone who knows me Too well, so I can't even lie Or cheat, or charm, my way inNo bullshit can be told, when it's you vs. your mindMaybe I should just give up, maybe this is a sign But no, myself would never let me do that; they're not that kind 

This poem is about: 
Me

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