My Adieu To Another Love

I've found Mr. Perfect, but is he Mr. Right?

Eyes of the deepest blue, a smile perfectly white.

 

I see the love that's in his eyes, so honest, so true.

But I've already fallen in love, as deep as it can get,

he was the most wonderful man, that I had ever met.

Not a day goes by, when i don't think of him,

but I'd fallen for him way too fast,

I should have known it would be grim.

There was no more perfect time, to explain this to my love,

but now it all ends too fast for any to dream of.

It's become my only nightmare,

this losing him once more,

but forever I shall try and try

to reopen that door.

It started as a break, we said,

I was hoping for the best,

But after such a lengthy time,

we'd finally put the love to rest.

It hurt the most there in the end,

but when I'd finally let him go,

I'd fallen down into a place that i had never known.

this place was dark and scary,

this place was empty as can be,

'Twas the part of my mind

that wouldn't let me think clearly.

Because it was filled with all of the memory.

The things I had wanted to never let be,

The things that corrupted my mind, corrupted me.

I'd become helpless,

and I'd become vain,

but there is so much i would give to have him again.

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