Muddy

There are muddy swamps

In autumn swamps are infested

Crocodiles like swamps

Comments

mrs earl

I have a few questions. the poem seems to be about autumn and then about swamps and then about crocodiles. Which should be the focus and how do you think you could create the focus in the poem?

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression. Always let poetry fill your life. Keep expressing your heart.  

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