Motivation in Me
Motivation is the dedication that drives me every day
It’s like how the sun don’t let the clouds cover the cheering rays
Play and find the way until goals become the better pay
Trim the chances of giving up and bring the chances that your parents motivate you to bring
Asses the artists which come within me
Who inspires me you may ask? The rose that bloomed me in the midnight sky, my mom
Ellen DeGeneres has the key to my inspiration as well so why don’t we continue in life, enjoy it, reach our goals and go on a shopping spree
Long is the life, let’s live the life, and sing a song to continue the motivation in me.
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cjay slim
great piece
Annette M Velasquez
This is inspirational, energy- filled and full of the positive. Your message is strong and to the point, but the rhythm looses flow somewhat. Try staying with rhyme or free verse, you can blend both, but don't switch abruptly. Also, keep the lines and line breaks mostly uniform. I don't mean to sound overly critical... your writing is powerful -these are just little things to enhance it. I've been writing and publishing nearly 35 years! Keep writing and read tons!