Mother

Location

21136
United States
39° 28' 10.3368" N, 76° 49' 46.0992" W

Mother!
Mother!
Put down that gun,
Don't you know I need you here.
Mother!
Mother!
It's not your time,
Me and Jess still love you here.
Mother!
Mother!
Oh why'd you go,
Now I'm here lost and all alone.
Mother!
Mother!
Can't you hear us here?
Crying because we were left alone.
Mother!
Mother!
I wish you were here,
So that you could have seen me grow
Mother!
Mother!
Is it too late to say,
That maybe I still love you so.

Comments

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

oh wow

very tragic , but powerul poem

this is a great way to reflect your thoughts behind the lost of your mom is through writing

continue to grow and build your ideas

keep writing

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