Morning to Night

If you think about it, its a beautiful sight
Even on the rainy days
And when the moons not as bright

Not everyday is perfect
Living morning through night
Cause nothing is perfect cause that's the way of life

The mornings considered good
But people are always slouchy
Mad cause its not night anymore, so they wanna act grouchy

While nights considered bad
But people are always glad
Going out with friends making memories last

But even though mornings are considered good
And nights are considered bad
Both times are still memorable but sadly they both fly by fast

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good poem overall 

keep writing

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