The moon is falling down

Wed, 06/10/2015 - 17:28 -- meowlli

The moon is falling down,
and I choke with my words.
You laugh while I drown.

You treated me like a clown;
you played with my heart.
The moon is falling down.

You walk away with my crown,
while I die for your love.
You laugh while I drown.

You'd rather leave this town,
and I would rather make you stay.
The moon is falling down.

The water looks brown,
poisoned by your words.
You laugh while I drown.

Your eyes only frown,
while mine pour rain.
The moon is falling down;
You laugh while I drown.

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