ON A MISSION - another pantoum

ON A MISSION

By Debi Lyn

10/04/13

 

This morning when I looked out my window

I saw a flock of geese pass by

Honking loudly and flapping their wings

They’re headed south for the winter

 

I saw a flock of geese pass by

One out in front, the others following

They’re headed south for the winter

One leader and his followers on a mission

 

One out in front, the others following

Nothing but the goal in sight

One leader and his followers on a mission

This morning when I looked out my window

 

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