miserably in love

Mon, 04/08/2013 - 00:53 -- me

I was miserably
You made me feel sick, joy, sad, happy,mad
And all of the above
In time these wounds will heal,
But for now the scars are gaping
Figuratively raping
Me on a subconscious level
The feelings I had were real
Now my heart is made of steal
But there's a weak spot
Sort of an Achilles heal
Where the feelings I had for you lay dormant
Ready to burst out any day
The flood gates are open
No words can be spoken
I hold inside
The pain that scrapes my mind
I'm to scared to let it show
Just thought I should let you know
I was miserably in love.....



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