Sat, 06/07/2014 - 03:48 -- angey7


I wish I could hold you
You don't remember our moments
Only an empty space of silence
You coming back to me is impossible now
Because heavens greatest angel fell
Now my tears flow straight down to hell
My heart will tell; without you it only wants to rebel
What kind of life is there without your love?
It's like making peace without the dove
Only loneliness and sorrow. No hope for tomorrow.
How could we know?
That destiny would let us go

Out of all gods’ men, I will not pretend;

Our few moments rocked me deeper than the ocean
No love so strong will fade in time.
Because for those fewer moments you truly were mine.

(C) & Written by, Angela Dorwin 2007



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