A Mind I Can't See

Nature nature where are thee


When I look I cannot see


I sense your wind flow through the trees


But my sight has fled away from me


How cruel how cruel to take from me


the light which travels to make me see


I hear the bird in the tree


despite the faithfulness of my mind to see


In and out around and about chirping and lurking

the animals of the forest love to taunt me

and haunt me with their words



Greetings, teubanks12. I really enjoyed A Mind I Can't See. It flows very well from one line to the next. You may consider using more imagery, as I'd like to see more elaboration on how the animals of the forest mock. Keep up the good work!

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