Memoir of an Unnamed Soldier

Location

49454
United States
43° 56' 25.3644" N, 86° 16' 36.48" W

They gave me a gun,
they told me to shoot.
We fought in the sun,
and left in the moon.

They gave me a uniform,
the color of blue.
We fought in the warm,
and left in the cool.

They gave me no shield,
they showed me no love,
as I lay on the field,
in a puddle of my blood.

I'm only a boy,
in a sea of true soldiers.
Only death will give me joy,
as I float with the faces.

I hear them say their quiet prayers,
as they ask for the strength to rise again,
but I only pray for our slayers,
as they leave us here to die true warriors.

Comments

Clio Texana

Was this poem inspired by a specific event? It's haunting -- reminds me so much of the battle of Fredericksburg.

emmachasse

No, when I wrote it several years ago I had no specific battle in mind. At the time, I was studying the Civil War and the number of casualties sickened me and I guess inspired me to write this poem.

Clio Texana

I know what you mean -- the numbers killed/mortally wounded are staggering, not even counting those who died of disease or exposure, or as prisoners of war.   

Anyway, it's a great poem (I wish it best of luck in the scholarship slam!) and it's good to see someone else on here who writes some historical poetry!

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