Like Me?

Sun, 09/21/2014 - 23:32 -- patln3

Do you really want to be like me?

Preach and pray and live like me?
Because unfortunately I'm more than you see,
There are evils and fears inside of me.
If holiness is what you see,
Then follow it please, but don't follow me,
Because I'm full of error and fallibility.
But if I could be perfect? For you all, I would be.


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