Making sense

Substance is lacking
and not a soul can see
in this world all men are grinding their teeth
when did we allow for this shackling

Hate rages
like a torrent of waters
making us falter
everlasting throughout the ages

nothing makes sense
out in the world
but when I write life's worth fourfold
despite all the suspense

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