In Love
I’m in love with the air
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I don't really come on this website often, and I rarely look up poetry (I'm afraid I'm rather inconsistent). All that said, I really like this poem. There's a simplicity to it which isn't pretentious, and is perfectly honest. There are many ways to write poetry badly, but this is actually quite pretty. I also can relate to the sentiment of being in love with some abstract concept, or being filled with an emotion which seems to be directed at nothing in particular. There is nothing in this for me to really criticize or elaborate on (not a bad thing). I haven't read anything else of yours, but I may do so soon. Thanks!
grestasa miller
-I Love This Poem, It Flows . It Has Its Own Voice. :), You Should Keep Writing .
kararenae
Awesome job. LOVE this poem!
jakestutzman
Beautiful
kunal
love with love
s love with you
thts was d first thng
i evr do
is tht fine
love with urslf
is tht mine
or sm1 else