Lost in Insanity

Location

01420
United States
42° 34' 36.732" N, 71° 50' 0.294" W

He sits alone lost and broken
Pondering his words left unspoken
Realizing what he has done
Realizing he is to blame
Knowing nothing will be the same
He gives into his urge to run
To hide lost in shame
With nothing around
With nowhere to turn
With everything to yearn
He drops to the ground and begs to be found

Comments

gpearson

the topic is very strong, but a use of other stylistic devices could greatly improve your work

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