Lost

Sun, 01/12/2014 - 01:10 -- Romyna

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I watched as I walked the city

Everywhere I see different things

Nothing lies before me

Not one second, munite and hour

 

Are you there?

Inside of me?

I'm lost and I need you

Hoping that you are watching me

 

Click. click. click

Is that you?

I'm lost and I need you

 

 

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Romyna

My favorite part about the Poem is the use of imagery that I used. Also, the poem has different meanings. For example, it can symbolize God, family, friends, and the environment. This poem is the typical type that defines our society today. We need "somebody" or "something" by our side, as we grow in life.

lilaay2767

Loved you poem like seriously...amazing!

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