looking down

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i’m barely holding on

and piece by piece i’ll fall

coming to the edge

looking down

i’m afraid that i might crawl

right back into your arms

holding on to you

i’m looking down

 

to this hole that you brought me to

filled with pieces broke by you

barely holding on i’m looking down

changed and all brand new

in the mirror who are you

with your eyes still on the ground

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