look at me

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98948
United States
46° 12' 52.1028" N, 120° 17' 45.8844" W

look at me,
what do you see?
a pretty face,
pretty smile,
A prefect girl, approximately.
i look in the mirror,
am i looking at me?
they say "she's pretty!"
but who is "she"?
i see mistakes,
i see scars,
imperfections all the way.
"she" can't be me,
i'm not pretty,
I'm not pretty like they say.
the only thing i DO see,
the eyes staring back at me,
with no mouth to speak,
they're saying what they see in me.
"this girl could go far,
but too low, she sets her bar."
i try to be confident,
still figuring out who i am.
a poet with scrambled words.
hard to put together,
this incomplete slam.

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