Tue, 08/09/2016 - 09:24 -- Bereki

Nimble breeze,
linger awhile,
caress my aching heart,
even if to leave it broken, when
you leave.


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Ganguly Sumit

The separation of lover is portrayed with pain.


Thanks for your comment, Sumit. Yes, that's the concept of the poem.

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