Longing

Wed, 01/14/2015 - 16:33 -- wahl23

you were just 17 when you had me

my daddy was always there never wanting to flee

throught the year as i grew up

you were over there parting i up

i longed for a mother who was never there

she was more into men

then her own kin

then one summer my dad met a woman

she was oh so kind

and i finally made up my mind

this woman would now be my mom

who would  beome the best there was

 
 

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