livestrong part 2-rise above hate featuring secretsleftbehind

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MVP Verse:
 
rise above the hate
a phrase instill to recreate
ideas full of innovation
ongoing education
everyday learning is a process of continuation
accomplishing achievements deserve rounds of standing ovation
avoided the baby mama/baby daddy situation
poor choices creates limitation
stop the obsession of appealing to weed infatuation
building minds fast of rapid elevation
touching a woman's soft spot igniting sexual sensation
intellectualizing a woman's mind that opens up desires of stimulation
maintaining attraction that doesn't leave one astray in not being seduce to unwanted temptation
raising a point with an exclamation
rewrite history that doesn't need approval of any proclamation
don't need to round off numbers to guest estimation
there is no hesitation
have everything planned out with all preparation
triumph accumulation
young people looking up to me as an admiration
never to mount up frustration
self reflection evaluation
don't listen to ignorant lies and mislead falsification
overcome struggles with love and determination
i will rise to the mountain top
and once again reach the promise land with more revelation
 
secretsleftbehind Verse:
 
you have to take charge of your being
thoughts to provoke your meaning
instilling the mentality that you’re done dreaming
cause we have one life
just flowing through the motions doesn’t cut it
dodge the negativity and hostility
ignite your desire to discover your ability
let go of your perceived futility  
don’t stop to reminisce on he said she said  
your insecurities will be your demise
reinvent what your finish line looks like
hold your head high, recreate that psych
 
 
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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

thank you eli for incredible collaboration

this poem rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Angelwith1wing

That is one awesome collaboration. I like how both of y'all use your lives, what y'all have experienced, and/or obstacles y'all have conquered to lead others to do the right things in their lives. The both of you are true leaders and great role models for the ignorant, troubled, and lost. Keep up the great work. Keep writing on my friends:)!!!

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

we spoke our minds on this piece

its about inspiring people

thank you for endless luv and support

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