Little Nickel

I was taking a stroll one day and I found a nickel.  So shiny so rich, and so little.  How cute my little nickel.  I continud to stroll and stop to see if I could buy a roll.  I said to the man, "please accept this little nickel."  He smiled and gave me a nod, and i just continued my stroll with my little roll.

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Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression! 

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