Fri, 03/27/2015 - 12:54 -- J.Noel

Have you ever found yourself in the state when you're asleep but still aware of your surroundings?
It's kind of like limbo between two worlds, not fully involved in either of them. But what if you were constantly in that state?
Floating in a black abyss of words with no meaning and sounds with no reason. Helplessly trying to grasp on to some aspect of reality; something to pull you into motion. But you can't.
So instead you live everyday in a mindless gaze; seeing, walking, observing but never fully understanding what's going on. Waiting for the day that your body regains a soul to give you meaning and purpose.
But until that day becomes a reality, you stray inbetween that limbo of living and simply existing.


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