Life goes down

Being alone with many thoughts in mind makes it hard to get through what needs to be done.

Life goes down when life has just begun.

Walking on the Earth’s ground with people all around you and yet no one is around you makes you all alone

Life goes down when you are all on your own.

Unable to speak the truth because everyone will just shun you makes it impossible to feel mentally outgrown.

Life goes down when you are unknown.

But what can change is judgment and the ability for people to enter the social zone.

Life cannot go down when people become more known.             

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