Life and Tears

Sometimes I just dont undertand why life can be so cold

why we do things we will regret in time we all grow old

I can't believe this path we're on most think we're living right

but what's so right in seeing death each day and everynight?

some people think this lifes a game they play it win or lose

is it a game when children die behind ones twisted views?

and it does matter rich or poor, the poor always lose out

while rich men compromise our lives as though our lives dont count

it hurts my soul to see these things take place each day by day

but who am I to say its wrong when "they" think its ok?

some people say my views are wrong that life is full of joy

but tell that to the mothers who just lost their baby boys. Trayvon Martin,

Tamir Rice, etc. etc, etc.

 

 

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

life can be cold due to the lust of the flesh

it's not okay that this world is sick and twisted orchestrated by satan where he lies to people

what's important is recognition of destructive actions/behaviors, and win over souls by making them disciples

in order for this world to be a better place, we all have the responisbility to make a difference and inspire others

 

well written my brother

Billie Gomez

thank you

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

anytime bro...........

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