Life

Location

Curiosity

please do not go.

For once you have

There's nothing else to know.

 

Laughter

Please do not cease.

For once you have

There's no more peace.

 

Childhood

Please don't leave me.

For once you have

There's only one place to be.

 

Maturity

Please embrace

For once you have

I become a different case.

 

Aging

Please be kind

For once you are

There's more treasure for a heart to find.

Comments

RebeccaYSPerez

I adore the format you gave to this poem, it has the classical rhythm and it paired so well in the way that you worked it. There is certainly something very beautiful in all the things that you have listen and I think you giving mention to them shows though they are often overlooked they are still very much beautiful- and I'm happy that you see that, Thank you for sharing this poem.

Rebecca

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