Wed, 05/01/2013 - 15:15 -- dbral


United States
34° 6' 10.8108" N, 118° 24' 37.6848" W

Challenges we face
But we make the pace

The answers inside they lie
But the time we cannot buy

Sometimes it takes time
Letting it settle is no crime

But don’t let it devour you up
Or else you’ll end all messed up

With friends and family speak it out
Or whatever else to get it all out

Like daggers in the heart it can feel
But remember, time will slowly heal

Whether illness or death your struggles
God watches over you and your troubles

Just like food that needs time to digest
Let it slowly internalize and it will not pest

Learn to say “This is for the best” and no more
Believing and saying this your troubles will be no more


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intersting poem

the style is cool-every verse ends with a rhyme

continue to be creative

keep writing

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