The last look in slow Hold

If i say that to one who is blind 

that light shines,

to tell me what image he does view

so i can image , a picture that the blind and his mind sees it 

in of what he drew.

i feel the wind 

the chirping of a sad and happy birds and the one who really paid 

attention

there is n also will be 

a disguise in form of what truly darkness can show you what purpose its role 

so 

so , i tell myself within my vessel ,gather my memory 

once you just ve seen as the last passage may seem like your heart raise and time collapses

reminder to myself 

dont be and do not go worry 

we in it together must take and archive that passage last picture/^

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