Island of Lost Souls

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People mindlessly wandering around

their souls never found.

Where the ocean meets the shore, 

is where these souls adore.

Young children and adults alike,

never alive to see this night.

The night of joy and happines.

The night of death and dreariness.

One will never know much about their lives

but contiue to let their own strive. 

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

this poem is about finding oneself

it's important to find that discovery and navigate one's way to success

keep writing

keep building off your ideas

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