Island haiku

Sun, 03/13/2016 - 15:53 -- npung

if stranded on island
all i need is a  white ball.
Call me cast away

Id name the ball wilson
Hearing his voice
Wilson's intent becomes clearer

Time goes forward fast,
i got good at spearfishing,
and building rafts

Wilson is talking
Telling me to get back home
Its time to test skill

Raft thats built stronger
Survives longer in the sea
Weather looks at ease

After days at sea
Weather takes a turn for worst
This raft turned hearse

Get found by a ship
Still alive, but barely.
Wilson, no one found.

My name is noland
was lost, but not forgotten
call me cast away.



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