Fri, 05/03/2013 - 08:25 -- jb9609

I've been inspired
By this great desire
To surpass my oppressors
Become my dream's defender
They will come true, they must
If not my efforts will go unjust
We all make choices but in the end our choices make us
If that's the case then I'm someone to trust
In myself and in my action
Will grant me satisfaction
I walk life every step of the way
Up those stairs every passing day
I wont give in and I wont give up
My inspiration is more then enough.



This is my first poem on this site look forward to any feedback and critique :)


I liked it, great job!

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