I'll Never Give Up On You

I’ll never give up on you,

So I’ll let you fall on your face.

I’ll let you learn from your mistakes,

Feel disgraced for your own sake.

 

I’ll never give up on you,

Thus, I’ll let you enter disputes.

Fights, you dare to shoot,

Even with victory, you fall mute.

 

I’ll never give up on you,

Furthermore, I’ll offer blunt advice.

Rivers flowing down your cheeks at night;

For its sacrifice, I remedy your heart to obliviate all but might.

 

I’ll never give up on you,

Until the day I die.

I have so much to teach…

...And you’re the reason why.

 

I’ll never give up on you,

I’ll comfort you when you’re down.

Even when you don’t want me around,

I will be the Hound tracking you ‘till you’re found.

 

I’ll never give up on you,

I’ll help you learn to fly.

I’ll be those glasses of wisdom,

Aiding those Chocolate-brown eyes.

 

I’ll never give up on you,

You’ll perspire greatly in life.

We’ll smile, laugh and joke together,

I’ll help expand your roots, so you may grow high.

 

So, this powerful piece, you may ask,

“What renders it true?”

Well, my Azure butterfly, it’s because…

...I’ll never give up on you!

 

 

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My family
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