If She Didn't Eat the Rapunzel

The story of Rapunzel, 

as we all know,

ends happily, when

feelings show.

 

Locked in a tower,

away from it all, 

could have been changed, 

if had not been a wall. 

 

Before she was born,

her mother had craved,

the plant her husband

had bravely paved.

 

But what if her husband

had a will to say no,

Would the witch have not cursed

their baby's future show.

 

If the father didn't scrower 

the witches garden,

There would be no curse

and no reason to harden. 

 

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