I Wonder Which World We Are Living In

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56301
United States
45° 27' 54.486" N, 94° 15' 5.598" W

I wonder which world we living in
Innovation of technology rapping us apart
Experiment on medicine killing the poor
But no one cares cus it looks normal in the eyes of human

Soon you close your eyes and open them another brother murder
No one knows why
The victim can’t testify cus he’s dead
The aggressor put smile on his face as he get caught with the weapons
Leaving mothers crying as they clean their children remains

Do you sat and wonder which world we living in?
Do you sit and wonder how far our rights have taken us?
Man is crazy how people buy guns for protection and others buy
Them to give family bad memories
Make them cry for years until their death

The right to bear arms is a bullshit as I sat and think about the whole shit
Cus other people get mad and lose their anger on the innocent ones
Then psychologies claim psychological disorder
But they never knew these people had this problem before purchasing guns
Or is it a way to make them slip out of the bubble?
Or finding out excuses to make them live among us again?

Am confuse
Cus even the so called educated ones are diffuse
Don’t know which side to go cus money buying their heart making
Them to tell lies
Freaming situation in another way when they were not even on the scene
Cus is a crazy world we’re living in

No peace everywhere I turn
Cus all the white colors turning red
Some don’t sat and think about this transformation
Cus the motivation on guns control seems not to work
Cus more rich people in Congress whose for the law
So no one to change it
Now the poor gotta deal with it

Comments

lizardoa21

I understand what your trying to say and your message is very strong and correct. I believe that going back and revising on the words themselves like spelling and what not would be great but other then that good job. What inspired you to write this piece?

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