I Was There Once

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65233
United States
38° 56' 18.2796" N, 92° 46' 34.0608" W

"Love of my life

Why do you hold a knife?

Don't you know the love?

And hope from up above

The demons you are now free of

The demands that you must give up

But you afriad that you might,

                                Slip up

                                Trip up

On words that once came easy

The hurt you buried so deeply

All the secrets you were keeping

As you tried to hide your feelings

Ordinary now seems appealing

I know,I was there once,   Believe me."

 

This poem is about: 
My country

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TamingOfSeaWolves

tell me how to improve~seawolf

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