i took a long walkCircling

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i took a long walk

Circling the earth.

i feel the gravation 

pulling my toes as it drifts closer 

to the sun.

i take a slight breath

i halt.

i still feel the air coming in and

out of my body.

Each end of my outter shell has

the same engery sign

i know because the pressure is unbearable.

no, its not like the films where

everything is moving in slow motion,

but yet i see every detail, every

aspect of this dogmatic world.

i am the only one that notice how

close we are to turning into ashes.

the idenity we made for ourselves,

the ones we took for many adorned lashes.

will vanish 

i vanished.

This poem is about: 
Me

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