I live where angels die

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94559
United States
38° 13' 46.74" N, 122° 19' 19.5204" W

i live where angels die,
in a world frozen over,
with no one to call you own,
no friends and no lovers,
this is where they lose their feathers,
their halo's fallen to the barren ground,
the glow of the pure holy fire gone from their eyes,
this is where angels fall down,
i live here in this hopeless world,
where the angels die,
forever to rot in this place,
forever where their bodies lie.

Comments

braidlocs

this is very touching because I also "live here inthis hopeless world"

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