I AM... Scholarship Slam

 

Destiny


Passionate, determined, benevolent, easygoing


Lover of animal’s 


Who fears of not achieving 


Who needs animal’s 


Who gives love 


Who would like to see peace

Who hates animal cruelty

With this I plan

To attend A&M

With this I plan

To be a vet

With this I plan

To achieve

With this I hope

You see

Who I am

In very

Small

Words

I

Am

My own Destiny

 
Resident of San Antonio, Texas


Dalesandro

This poem is about: 
Me

Comments

Stepover

Good. But lacks flow and detail, if i were to critically analyse this I'd be bored because it's plain try giving it more of a personal feel.

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