Hurt

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60620
United States
41° 44' 49.2504" N, 87° 40' 4.7172" W

throughout the hurt and pain I thought I loved you,throughout the good bad and worse I thought I was there for you. where were you where was I when the love faded away. Moving away from everything know and safe,then came the depression from missing you and wanting you to hold me again.( TO BE CONTINUED)

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

like how u ended poem "to be continue"
there is more to say u want to express
great intro-im a power poetry mentor
keep writing

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