I saw him

From across the room

I knew he would never be mine

So I simply looked and admired from afar

Unknowing he was doing the same to me

Caught in seperate worlds

United by a common thread

A simple "Hi"

Since that day

We have not stopped talking

He saved me


Seven months later

He still makes weak my knees

Tremble my heart

Oh, tremble

For He and I have become We


I will continue to tremble

Tremble at the thought 

That one glance

Changed my life forever

Forever altered

Forever united

To this man I cannot

Believe is real

But is

Is mine




I really like this poem. I liked all of the imagery that you put in to make it come alive. Good job! :)

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